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The Monster Who Collected Smiles

On Halloween night, Daniel meets Comemiedos — a shy little monster who collects smiles instead of candy. Together they turn a spooky evening into the friendliest one on the block.

Children'sHalloween4–8 yearsFree
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The Monster Who Collected Smiles

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Halloween night smelled like leaves and sweet candy.

Daniel walked from porch to porch with his treat bag, feeling brave and bouncy. A jack-o-lantern winked from the steps.

Then, behind it, someone gave a tiny giggle.

Daniel blinked. —Pumpkins do not giggle, right?

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The giggle came again, soft as a bubble.

Daniel leaned closer, very slowly. Behind the pumpkin sat Comemiedos, trying to hide and not sneeze.

—Please do not run away, he said.

Daniel smiled. —I only run from broccoli soup.

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Comemiedos peeked out and sighed.

—I do not collect candy, he told Daniel. —I collect smiles. But tonight everyone runs before looking properly.

Daniel looked properly. He saw a shy friend, not a fright.

—Then we need a plan.

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At the next porch, Daniel knocked. Knock, knock!

The door opened, and Daniel held up his bag. Comemiedos hid behind him, jingling by mistake.

Daniel whispered, ready?

Comemiedos popped out and waved.

The neighbor gasped, then laughed. One bright smile floated into Comemiedos's heart.

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Door by door, the plan grew sweeter.

Daniel got candy. Comemiedos got smiles. Some neighbors clapped and called him the best costume of the night.

Comemiedos stood taller each time.

—Should I say trick or treat?

—Say smile or treat. It is your thing.

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Near the last house, Comemiedos stopped on the sidewalk.

—What if this smile runs away too?

Daniel took his paw and squeezed it gently.

—Then we wait. Smiles are shy sometimes.

Comemiedos rang his bell: ding! The door opened, and laughter spilled out.

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Later, Daniel and Comemiedos sat on the porch steps under the October moon.

Daniel opened his bag and chose one candy.

—Trade? One candy for one last smile.

Comemiedos grinned so wide Daniel laughed too.

Their night ended sweet, brave, and full of light.

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The Monster Who Collected Smiles opens on a Halloween night that smells of fallen leaves and sweet candy. Daniel is going porch to porch with his treat bag, feeling brave and bouncy, when a jack-o-lantern winks from the steps and a tiny giggle floats out from behind it. Pumpkins do not giggle... do they?

Behind the pumpkin hides Comemiedos, a small turquoise monster who does not collect candy at all — he collects smiles. The trouble is that everyone runs away before looking properly. Daniel looks properly, sees a shy friend instead of a fright, and the two make a plan: door by door, Daniel gathers the candy while Comemiedos gathers the smiles, until the neighbors crown him the best costume of the night.

Gentle, funny, and completely free of real scares, this is a Halloween story for children aged 4 to 8. It is perfect for a cozy read on an October evening, a calm bedtime alternative to spookier tales, or a classroom read-aloud about kindness and looking a little closer before we decide what to be afraid of.

A Halloween story where nobody has to be scared

Not every Halloween tale needs shivers to be fun. In this one, Daniel is trick-or-treating on a candy-scented night when a jack-o-lantern seems to giggle. Behind it he finds Comemiedos, a shy turquoise creature whispering "please do not run away." Daniel, who admits he only runs from broccoli soup, decides to look properly — and that single choice sets off a warm, funny adventure with zero jump-scares and zero darkness-as-threat.

What children take away from it

Comemiedos does not want candy; he collects smiles, and tonight nobody will slow down long enough to give him one. As Daniel helps door by door — "you get the candy, I get the smiles" — little readers see empathy in action: fear often melts the moment we stop and truly look at someone. Comemiedos stands a little taller with every kind face, and "smile or treat" becomes his own brave version of trick or treat. It is a gentle lesson in kindness, courage, and first impressions.

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